'google658fd05d77029796.html' Love, College aur Friendship | The Original Poetry






college ka tha wo pehla pehla din..
cloud cover se sunlight thi kuch dim..
seniors ke darr se chehre par baja baara tha..
doctor sahib namaste hi apna favorite naara tha..
uniform white, nazrein neechi, heartbeat high thi..
gale ka fanda bani meri khud ki tie thi..

bahut dhunda par lecture hall na mila..
us par peechhe tha seniors ka kafila..
dhadkan par kaabu kar maine kadmo ko tez kiya..
manzil ki talaash mein idhar udhar gaze kiya..
saanso ko thaame darr ko swallow kar raha tha..
kashmakash me white dress wali ladki ko follow kar raha tha..

mere badhte kadmo ki or ladki ne kiya gaur..
boli yes, what are you looking for?
“oh no nothing, oh yes” I said gently..
sunke laga maano someone is challenged mentally..
jo usko dekha to bus dekhta gaya..
dil ke tawe pe love ki rotiyaan sekta gaya..
mujhe dekhke wo kuch is tarah muskayi..
maano mujhe dhund kar boli ho ‘I spy, I spy’..
ab bhi meri aankhein uski aankhon par thehri thi..
bhoore rang ka paani odhe, samandar si gehri thi..

masoom ladke par ye kaisa atyachaar hua..
doctor banne aaya tha, pehle din beemar hua..
usi din se use apna banane ka irada kar liya..
romeo, majnu aur ranjhe ka combined wada kar liya..

har lecture mein professor se zyada usko dekha kiye..
front bench aur last bench ke faasle ko har pal kosa kiye..
ek din class mein mujhe mummy ki yaad aayi..
beta sabse aage rehna awaaz aayi..
maine dost ko puchha aage chalta hai kya bol..
professor ki shakal dekh kar wo bola control..

valentine’s day par ladki ko propose kar diya..
we are just friends kehke usne mujhe dispose kar diya..
dil mera one two ka four hua..
kul mila kar zero apna score hua..

dil ke tukdon ko hum kuch yun see rahe they..
kamine doston ke sath baithkar pee rahe they..
dil tootna yun to ek saza tha..
broken heart gaano ka tab lekin apna maza tha..
kishore rafi ko jo kehna tha wo keh gaye..
gaane sunke sala do char aansu extra beh gaye..

tab doston ne diya mujhe ek funda..
beta peeche padja chahe tamatar maare ya anda..
duniya ki har ladki ek na ek din pati hai..
jahan saavdhani hati samjho durghatna ghati hai..
maine kaha salo koi achcha idea dhund kar lao..
roadways ka poster meri love story par mat chipkao..

aakhir ye idea hi ek din mere kaam aaya..
chauthe proposal mein jake usko mujh par pyar aaya..
aaj tak wo ladki meri date hai..
uske pyar mein mera dil ab bhi copper sulphate hai..
mere dost ab tak mujhe uske naam se chidhaate hain..
sale aaj tak mujhe lassu keh kar bulate hain..

wo din aksar yaad aaya karte hain..
soch kar hum ab bhi muskuraya karte hain..
pyar ke wo din aur dosti ki raatein..
nahi bhulti love, college aur friendship ki baatein..


     - Dedicated to college life (Deepak Kripal)


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22 Responses so far.

  1. this is dedicated to my college life and my friends (devendra, sunil, vikas, chand, chitresh, bhaddu and joseph)..

  2. an attempt to picture college life with lighter brushes..

  3. bahut badiya....sari baton ko poem bana diya...great talent...

  4. college life beautifully crafted in poetry....nostalgic...keep it up....

  5. Pehle din hi shuru ho gaye?
    Doctor ka to pata nahin lekin shayar ache ho.

  6. haha wow amazing poetry. You are an awesome writer & poet :) Baht pyaari poem this, you did justice to every feeling & emotion involved in college life. Hats off to you :) Take care!

  7. Aww....those blissful days of college...

    waise Doctor saheb, apne marizon ka bhi khyaa rakhte ho, yaa phir yunhi..... :P

  8. thanx indu, irfan and
    tanya for going thru.. to be
    honest pehle din se shuru
    nahi hua thanks. i hv
    manipulated the story a
    little to turn it into an
    integrated story..
    jahan tak back benches ki
    bat hai to i agree with Dr
    apj abdul kalam that best
    minds are found on the
    back benches.. :)
    i m glad u guys enjoyed it..

  9. Jay Singh says:

    Hi Deepak,

    Wow, purani yaadein taazi kar di. College ke wo shaandar din, humesha yaad rahenge. Thank you for sharing this post and your memories with us.

    Keep up the good work

    Regards

    Jay
    http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

  10. Lovely verses which got me emotional and highly nostalgic!!! :-)

    Murtaza Ali
    http://www.apotpourriofvestiges.com/

  11. bahut hi khoobsoorat andaaz mey bayan kiya hai college ke un khoobsoorat dino ko

    beautiful

  12. fantastic.......
    kya din the wo...
    it rewinds us to that nostalgia
    called-COLLEGE LIFE..

  13. CYNOSURE says:

    amazing one...most precious days of our life... :)

  14. You brought all those moments I lived in my golden life....
    Touched my heart....

    Noopur
    http://apparitionofmine.blogspot.in/

  15. it made me relived those wonderful days of my life!!
    very nice attempt
    it simple made me smile :)

  16. thanx Jay, Murtaza,Noopur, Cynosure, Swati , Rajni and Sunil boss.. i am really happy that i cud evoke nostalgia thru these lightly written lines..

    many thanx for visiting.. keep coming :)

  17. simply superb with a tinge of humour. Rhyme was lovely. :)

  18. thanx Surbhi.. i welcome you with a warm heart to my blog... thanx for visiting and becoming a member... i hope to see you more...

  19. Zee Leo says:

    wonderful written dude

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  20. Hey, nice blog
    I have nominated your blog for the liebster blogger award

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    Congrats :)
    Happy Blogging

  21. great bro... vry nic, bahut badhiya or kafi batein milti - julti hai meri isse.... vry nic likhte rho, great & wonderful written...



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