my story is ordinary..
with its share of gloom and melancholy..
I crumble under pressure on occasions..
but i have learned to revolt with time..
I have feared things, big and small..
I still do, but its okay overall..
my destiny still hangs in balance..
but I live with it, often with a smile..
I have seen defeats, some with awe and despair..
but they never overwhelmed me enough to stop doing what i endear..
I have found myself shattered and broken at times..
but I never let those moments to see the morning sunrise..
my faith has shaken, trembling now and then..
but i never yelled at God, for I have faith in his acumen..
my partner complaints that I do certain things wrong..
but I am still her hero, I still feature in her song..
there have been times, I have been put in a hole..
but it never kept me away from the sight of my goal..
I have been uncertain, doubts have played their part..
I still ponder over things but I have become a little smart..
chaos and darkness surround me sometimes..
but I have learned to wait till the light is burning bright..
I am not perfect, I blunder here and there..
but I strive to endure no matter how I fare..
for I am an ordinary man..
and my story is ordinary!!
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its ordinary people that make extraordinary stories, keep it up! nice poem..
you are absolutely right. every person has a hero in him/her..
awesome!!!
Well organized in poetic form :)
thanx Miku..
I am not perfect, I blunder here and there..
but I strive to endure no matter how I fare..
that I think is what is extraordinary about the ordinary
I am not perfect, I blunder here and there..
but I strive to endure no matter how I fare..
that is what is extraordinary about the ordinary
couldn't agree more..
there is nothing ordinary about being ordinary...
nice poem..u r writing like professionals...
Good post....
View this blog to see some short stories....
http://teckop.blogspot.in/2012/10/the-story-of-hair-and-there.html
nice... :) nice piece of work :)
Hi Vandana. I am really glad that you loved this. Welcome to the blog. And thank for joining The Original Poetry. You are a treasured member now.
These lines stand out, 'I have seen defeats, some with awe and despair..
but they never overwhelmed me enough to stop doing what i endear..'
A extra-ordianary and true poem which we all can relate to.
Nice! :)
Very well written...& inspiring too...!!!