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you and me are the same,
then why are these differences?
we swore to dwell in each others' vein,
then who has put these fences?

we still occupy each others' thought,
but why our mind's are empty?
we cared for each other selflessly,
now why are we looking for guarantee? 

we loved each other for what we are,
now why don't we let us be?
love still binds us together,
but why aren't we free?

we still feature in each others' dreams,
then why have we stopped dreaming?
our hearts' still beat for our love,
but why it keeps on paining?

when everything is obvious,
why we refuse to see?
if love is locked in clouds of doubt,
why aren't we looking for the key?

we had a beautiful world,
why it is now so dark?
we said life is a journey,
but why don't we embark?

we cherished each drop of care,
where have we lost the sea?
all our life, answers ended with ''you'',
why every question now starts with ''me''?





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17 Responses so far.

  1. Anonymous says:

    great.....

  2. Sri Valli says:

    Awesome questions and loved the ending answer....:)
    Beautifully rhymed poem!

  3. Vinay says:

    One of the finest posts... :)

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  4. every relationship hits the block, the last line says it all. great poem.

  5. Antriksh says:

    Very touchy! Gr8 Work.

  6. all our life, answers ended with ''you'',
    why every question now starts with ''me''?


    'philosophical and true

  7. Anonymous says:

    loved your poetry ..

  8. Unknown says:

    irony of relationship..but true...gr8 expression....

  9. abhi tak ka ur best
    damn good....superb

  10. i treasure your recognition..

  11. Good piece of poetry!!

  12. Reshma says:

    Loved the poem, the best lines have to be " all our life, answers ended with ''you'',
    why every question now starts with ''me''?"

  13. It's rhyming well, a few lines are very catchy and pretty true too. Well written. But do keep a watch on your apostrophe!
    :)

  14. Thanx Megha for visiting.. hope to see you more..

  15. Unknown says:

    Awesome poem..loved it..๐Ÿ‘Œ

  16. thanx ravneet.. I am really glad you loved it :)

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