chalta raha khwabon ka karvaan, 
ki bandishon se pare kahin to noor hoga. 
wah re khuda jism ko saye ki bhi sangat na thi. 

surmayi bhi chhup gai kahin chilman mein, 
roshni ko qaynaat ki bhi barkat na thi. 

karta raha chiraag se raushan,
ki anjaan safar mein kahin to kinara hoga. 
wah re khuda kashti ko taaron ki bhi jhalak na thi. 

phir bhi chalta raha khwaabon ka kaarvan umeed mein, 
ki bandishon se pare kahin to noor hoga ..
par wah re khuda tere gumaan ki bhi falak na thi. 

nainsaafi ki intehaan hai ye par,
wah re khuda kashti ko taron ki bhi jhalak na thi..



                     - Manvendra Rana (Guest Writer)



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20 Responses so far.

  1. WOW.. Absolutely Marvelous..
    This composition touched my heart. There is something other worldly about it.. 'Ethereal' is the word..

    Thoroughly loved it Manvendra.. I am really lucky to have a writer like you on this platform.. Keep writing dear..

  2. prolific words

    karta raha chiraag se raushan,
    ki anjaan safar mein kahin to kinara hoga.

  3. Debopam says:

    Wonderful.......

    http://debnature.blogspot.in

  4. Manvendra Rana says:

    Thanks Deepak bhaiya, words from a writer like u ,enrich my poetic mite!

  5. Manvendra Rana says:

    Thanks Vishal ji, it's always a great delight when someone points to the emotional part of writing beyond semantics.

  6. Manvendra Rana says:

    Thanks Meenakshi ji, u always like my poems.

  7. Manvendra Rana says:

    Debopam ji, thanks fr reading nd liking d poem.

  8. jahid says:

    Aree Wah! Wah! Manvendra Rana.

    "wah re khuda jism ko saye ki bhi sangat na thi." simply superb!

  9. wah! wah! kya baat hein...

    ki bandishon se pare kahin to noor hoga ..

  10. Wah Wah Ranaji, bahut khoob! Lafzon ko joda hai bemisaal.

  11. Manvendra Rana says:

    Shukriya Jahid sahab is tareef ke lie, sach mein kabi kabi man feels marooned to such extent nly.

  12. Manvendra Rana says:

    Thanks Sunil Arya ji, its heartening to see dat u r touched by my poems

  13. Manvendra Rana says:

    Dhanyavad Fayaz ji, kosish karunga ki meri kavitaein apki tareef ke qabil rahein.

  14. odyzz says:

    Wow!! amazingly beautiful..!! loved reading it..

  15. Manvendra Rana says:

    Thanks Mr. Odyzz, my pleasure dat u loved reading my poem

  16. Mixi says:

    Shabdon se dil ke jazbaton ko bayan toh kiya
    Par wah re khuda, Manvendra ji ke blog ka link nahi diya :)

    A beautifully evocative poem.

  17. Manvendra Rana says:

    Thanks Mixi ji, fr liking nd praising in poetic theme. I m nt a blogger Mixi ji, just a guest writer of 'The Original Poetry' blog.

  18. i am not too proud when i say but my hindi is not as expressive as english, but i liked what i read, just 1 small suggestion i would love to see this written in hindi rather than english.

  19. Please don't complain that hindi poems are not written in devnagiri script. I am an author at ezine articles and they don't accept articles from blogs written in any other script other than english. So I have to write hindi poems in english script. I hope you will understand. Enjoy the poem.

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