kuch is tarah wo dil todne pe aamaada hain..
ke zulfon me khanjar chhupaye baithe hain..

katra katra kar ke dil mera..
afsos phir bhi muskuraye baithe hain..

ilzam unhe dein bhi to kaise..
jab khud hi ret ka ghar banaye baithe hain..

to kya hua wo mere khoon ke pyase hain..
hum bhi seene mein samandar samaye baithe hain.

kuch kissa hi ajeeb hai apni kahani ka..
kya karen ke qaatil se dil lagaye baithe hain..





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17 Responses so far.

  1. thanks indu.. glad you like it..

  2. AmitAag says:

    ...bhai bahut khoob Deepak!
    (zakhm gahraa hai;))

  3. "kya karen ke qaatil se dil lagaye baithe hain.."

    बोहत उम्दा....!!

  4. Thanks Amit ji.. your words means a lot.. kehtein hain shayari karne ke liye dard hona zaruri hai.. :)

    thanks Matheikal.. your three words made my day..

    thanks Swati... i look forward to see you more..

    You are absolutely right Kislaya (evergreen leaf), ishq is dangerous indeed..

  5. jahid says:

    Bohut Badiya, Sir Ji :)

    Regards,
    Jahid
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  6. ओह ! तेरी .. आप तो सारा इंतज़ाम करके बैठे है

  7. Kya baat hai.... amazing. :)

  8. thanx Meenakshi, Jahid and Neha..

    And Kirti.. intezaam to karna padta hai.. :)

  9. sahe says:

    Love ur poems. Short but wealth of meaning.. Get published, guy..

  10. Hello Sahe.. I will get published sometime in future I guess.. I appreciate your gesture. Thank you so much dear..

  11. I loved the third set of lines. I so love when someone writes using the word ret. I wrote something similar,

    'रेत के घरोंदे सा मेरा मन,
    हर चीस पे ढेह जाता है ! "

    It's a beautiful expression, loved reading it. :)

  12. Wow..excellent Dee... Keep it up.

  13. Thanx for reading Rav.. It is such enthusiastic reactions that keeps me going :)

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