behind this smile
lies a painful file
i had gone a mile
but everything got destructed in a while
no hard feelings
but this heart keeps drilling
even in june
it leaves me chilling
all the moments we were together
i kept furling like a feather
every moment was autumn weather
but she left me alone
in a moment,
everything was gone
no hard feelings
but this heart keeps drilling
even in june
it leaves me chilling
this loneliness prevails
i am totally derailed
as if i am jailed
i am totally alone at this junction
feeling bad,
oh i can't function
but no hard feelings
my heart keeps drilling
even in june
it leaves me chilling
so what
she is still in my dreams
i keep floating in memory stream
from my dreams,
i keep churning cream
but my soul keeps reeling
still no hard feeling
and this heart keeps drilling
even in june
it leaves me chilling
By Sourabh Kumar (Guest Writer)
Categories:
English Poetry
a beautiful rhyming poem with some deep thoughts and true emotions.
LOVELY :)
i always feel rhyming words...gives an extra edge to the poem...and this is such a beautifully crafted poem i fell in love with the words...!!!
good rhyming . Reminded my heartbreak too .
i loved the flow...beautiful poem...:)
nice senti poem..ya love is painful....
love is great , love is heavenly ,,love is blind!!
but it empties yr pocket and makes u loose yr mind :P :D
HI,
WISH YOU AND YOUR LOVED ONES A VERY HAPPY VALENTINE's DAY..HAVE A GOOD ONE.NICE POEM
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kiran
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Beautifully done, repetition has a given it a lyrical edge.
this poem progresses like a song,there should me music to these words
Beautiful...rhyming makes the reading absolutely pleasurable,Deepak.!
I admire rhymes in poetry . .Loved this poem . . simple yet evocative . The repetitiveness has added more colour to the verse :)
Everything rhymes :-D :-D Good one :D
Nicely done !
thank u all:-)