'google658fd05d77029796.html' Tu Jana, Chale Jana | The Original Poetry




main to chup hoon,
tu kuch keh to le
dhehne se pehle,
do pal ko beh to le
tu jaana,
chale jana
par jaane se pehle,
kuch din reh to le

teri raah bunta jo,
ladka tere hi shehar ka hai
tere hi saath khela tha,
teri hi umar ka hai

jaana,
chale jaana
main rokta nahin,
shayad rok bhi na paaunga
par ek baar ko tham ja zara
teri kuch yaadein hain mere paas
do pal ko unmein ram ja zara

teri shararaton se lathpath hai jo,
tujhe us deewar ki kasam
teri atkhelion ke geet gungunate,
aangan ke khanakte taar ki kasam

tera khul ke hasna,
phir jhagad jana
keechad ki fuhaarein,
baarish mein nahana

bhula nahi main,
mujhe ab bhi yaad hai
sapno mein kahin
wo duniya ab bhi aabaad hai

wo jhoothe bahane
kuch kisse purane
kaajal ki kothri
aur hum do deewane

tu jaana,
chale jana
bade shehar ki bheed tujhe wapas bulati hogi
shayad meri awaaz tujhe rok na paaye
dard to hoga,
par shayad tere rehte hum ro na paayein
pankh phailaana,
tu ud jana
par jane se pehle
ek baar mud jaana
kyunki ghupp andhera hai yahan,
gehri udaasi hai
teri ek nazar ko tarasta
tere bachpan ka saathi hai

tu jaana,
chale jana
ye nahi kehta ke ruk jana
na lipatna,
na gale se lagana
bus nazar bhar ke dekh lena
aur ho sake to muskurana




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  1. Writing something for the blog after a long time. And there is no better thing to write about than good old childhood friendship. I hope you guys enjoy it. Nostalgia is not that bad a thing. :)

  2. Awe-inspiring. Every line is so beautifully crafted and evokes strong memories and brings a Smile to the face :)

    tu jaana,
    chale jana
    ye nahi kehta ke ruk jana
    na lipatna,
    na gale se lagana
    bus nazar bhar ke dekh lena
    ho sake to muskurana!

    Definitely Deepak! beautiful summarisation!

  3. kushal says:

    only one word.. "awesome" dude.

  4. Great words Nicely penned. after long time ?

    Travel India

  5. Hey Kislaya. Thank you so much for reading thru. Loved the way you put it into words. You are always a treasure in these pages. :)

  6. Hello Kushal. Welcome to the blog dear. I am glad you loved it on your first visit. See you around dude. :)

  7. Hey Vishal. Thanks for coming over bro. I was really busy with something very important, so couldn't take out the time for blogging. I am looking forward to slowly resuming the ride across the blogosphere. :)
    Thanks for coming again. You are always a treat.

  8. mysay.in says:

    Super Like !! Amazing dil ki dastan .... wo bachpan ki dosti ... wo bichadna ... last lines are amazing ... na lipatna na gale se lagna ... bas nazar bhar dekh lena .. wah wah !! amzing read !! very creative !! very touchy !!

  9. wonderful

    read my poetries in blog
    http://happygarg.blogspot.com/

  10. i miss my guys...sir u have written so well

  11. Hello Bhawana, I am really glad you loved it. I hope you meet your guys soon. :)

    See you around dear. Keep coming :)

  12. Hello Happy, i am glad that you like the poem. You are very welcome to the blog, and thank you so much for joining the original poetry. You are a treasured member now. :)

  13. My eyes welled up ..beautifully written

  14. Thank you Prabal for coming over and reading. See you around. :)

  15. Hey Shilpi. You made my day by saying that. I hope to see you more in these pages. Thank you so much for visiting.

  16. Very touching lines straight from the heart.

    pankh phailaana,
    tu ud jana

    Yes,this is how our companions are torn away,expansion & better prospects beckon!

  17. CYNOSURE says:

    nice one buddy... :)

  18. wov....excellent deepak.
    very beautifully captured essence of feeling on such a painful juncure..
    .tu jaana,
    chale jana
    ye nahi kehta ke ruk jana
    na lipatna,
    na gale se lagana
    bus nazar bhar ke dekh lena
    aur ho sake to muskurana

  19. kese bus kuch shabdo me apne speechless kar diya...laga jese ki mai apne bachpan ko jiwant dekh rahi hu...kuch ajib sa laga jiske liye koi ehssas nahi bana bayan karne k liye..

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