'google658fd05d77029796.html' Love, shit..! | The Original Poetry

sitting west,
stately look
cuddling tress,
turning book

lipstick red,
radiant cheek
my signal strong,
feedback weak

careful prod,
eyeline shunting
bag of tricks,
happy hunting

she looks right,
she looks left
i look center,
classic neglect

thumping heart,
runaway train
clueless mind,
clogged drain

shouting earth,
heavens laughing
pity on me,
she's not watching

fortune's imbalance
girl's nonchalance
life is stuck
hell with luck


hell broke,
cupid woke
she just saw,
newton's law

romantic terror,
tragedy of error
unperturbed she,
i am all over

cloudless rain,
pollen grain
official statement,
i am insane

sanity froze,
lethal dose
bug bit,
love, shit..!


19 Responses so far.

  1. romance, on a lighter track.. :)

  2. Hilarious! :D :D

  3. bushra M says:

    Awesome...Haha Enjoyed it sop much Deepak :D

  4. Sahiba says:

    Funny!!! yet effective :)

  5. Well well-nice take.Better than pining for lost love.

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  7. Anonymous says:

    poem sounds flow like a good game of housie!:)
    amazing poem!

  8. jahid says:

    Haha.. Deepak Sir, that was very hilarious Love bytes suna tha and now love shits :) :)

  9. Ha haa... Very nice :D

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  10. Nima Das says:

    This poem is so cute

  11. hahaha! funny but twas fun to read :D

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