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glutted by glittering facade of dreary gleam,
i gazed steadily into the dark..
bewildered by wan silence of  it's plashy haze,
i long to go back where i come from..
where i belong..

a place where i am with her..
right on top of the hills..
where life dances with sprightly daffodils..
where even swarthy veil of gloom,
bear some semblance of light..
for there is the shadow of god,
inhabitance of heavenly might..
my mother!
she's my mother!

found reason in my most unreasonable cries..
my tears trickled through sable orbs of her ever vivid eyes..
paid heed to subtle signs of my meaningless mumblings..
held me as i tumbled, took me into her protective wings..
random utterances promised an unbreakable bond..
pause of words resembled angel's most beautiful song..

love kindles in the twinkling of her eyes..
pain dwindles through her reassuring lies..
who am i?
nothing but her blood and flesh..
i belong to her, no more no less..
for she's the mother..
my beautiful mother!





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17 Responses so far.

  1. Hey its a beautiful poem
    the use of rich words have embellished it more
    keep up the good work

  2. Hiten says:

    Hi Deepak,

    It's great to be at your blog.

    What a lovely poem. It exemplifies the unbreakable bond between a mother and her child. God bless our mums!

  3. who am i?
    nothing but her blood and flesh..
    i belong to her, no more no less..


    lovely lines

  4. thanx guys... its a tribute to every mother..

  5. Beautiful words for the most loved relationship.

  6. There is nothing like mother's love indeed. Lovely sentiment here.

  7. Great Poem Deepak..
    There's so much to read on your blog. I also liked your idea of getting guest writers, very interesting material.
    Will keep visiting.

  8. prophet (saw) said "Paradise lies under the feet of your mother"
    You have done your duty by writing a poem about mother. Whenever I see an article or poem about mother I like it as I love my mother
    "Allah will reward you [with] goodness."

  9. Lovely poem .... wonderfully worded straight from the heart ! I will be reading more of your work on this blog ... keep writing !

  10. debu says:

    The warmth of the womb...is the feeling under a quilt.

  11. Thanks Nidhi.. it was a pleasure having you here..

    Hi debu.. welcome to the blog.. i wish to see you more here..

  12. It's an amazingly beautiful poem. I loved this line a lot, 'where life dances with sprightly daffodils...' Second last paragraph is so full of life.

    Thanks for a beautiful read. :)

  13. My pleasure Saru.. Its great to have you here. I would love to see you more often. Glad you like the poem.. Keep reading :)

  14. Vandana says:

    lovely! i absolutely loved the lines -
    "random utterances promised an unbreakable bond..
    pause of words resembled angel's most beautiful song.."

  15. This is a wonderful composition. Thanks for sharing.

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