if love is meant to set
you free,
why it ends only in monogamy?
why it ends only in monogamy?
why is it important to define,
relations which are bound with time?
relations which are bound with time?
can I love without naming it,
sans expectations in every bit?
how am I expected to speak
coherently,
when thoughts have me choked already?
when thoughts have me choked already?
is this definition of love hypocrisy,
to be with the person whom you love, eternity?
i struggle, as relationships are few
and if no monogamy, then it’s a broken drop of dew.
i wonder if I can ever stitch this fall,
for I have loved truthfully, yet had to loose all.
- IamZee (Guest Writer)
Categories:
English Poetry,
Guest Writers
What a beautiful poem. It beautifully describes the distance that creeps in relationships.
i wonder if I can ever stitch this fall,
for I have loved truthfully, yet had to loose all.
Concluding lines packs a punch. Very poignant..
Hello IamZee.. I am thankful to you for choosing my blog to display such a wonderful poem. I welcome you to the team of guest writers. I would love to know your name but I have no problem if you like to write with this name (IamZee) only.. Thank you once again.. And I would love to see some other colour of your writing.
very interesting..love potrayed in a different form....esp. shades of gray...which are really present in ths relation.
Lovely poem! esp these lines..."why is it important to define
relations which are bound with time?"
Too good :)
Regards
Village Girl
It is something else to fall in love but entirely a different thing to bind that love with relationship. Very nice poem describing the confusion delicately.
A loving confusion!
Ambit of Love questioned!
Detached non-love to more then love !
A very different aspect of love - the paradox that if love sets you free, then why are we bound by relationships? Is there a link to the guest writer's blog somewhere here?
how beautifully expresses shades of real life..
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.for I have loved truthfully, yet had to loose all.
I have never liked confining the depth of the word 'love' to romantic encounters alone. It is the society who has deluded us into thinking
of love in a uni-directional way, to an extent that today we have almost forgotten what is should really mean!!!
really nice poem, sometimes even after "distances love creeps in " on the other hand sometimes "distances creep in love".