life is not a fairy tale
success is prison,
that we have to bail
sometimes we pass,
often we fail

everyone is on their own, mate
if one door is closed
we have open, another gate
and that's why I am fighting against fate

to keep walking,
is in our hand
sometimes it's flower,
sometimes thorn on the land
no one knows the song,
that will be played by life's band
and we are forced to dance,
on the burning sand


everyone is on their own, mate
if one door is closed
we have open, another gate
and that's why I am fighting against fate

life is like a chewing gum,
 we have to chew
moments when it's sweet,
 are far and few,
we just can't spit it,
and have a new
we have to wait,
as dry grass waits for the dew
we search, we pry
only at the right moment,
 we can fly

everyone is on their own, mate
if one door is closed
we have open, another gate
and that's why I am fighting against fate


Sourabh Kumar (Guest Writer)






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20 Responses so far.

  1. A very good take on life and its myriad intricacies.

    LOVELY LINES Sourabh..

  2. So discerning--you really are a master at expressing your feelings,i esp. liked this one
    and we are forced to dance,
    on the burning sand

  3. Sourabh . Salute to you for displaying the perfect attitude required to live a life.

  4. Anjan Roy says:

    it's inspiring...splendid poem

  5. Bushra says:

    Beautiful lines:)

  6. Manvendra Rana says:

    Saurabh miya cha gaye dost.

  7. Raqeeb says:

    splendid yaar...
    lines touches my heart.

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  8. A very nice poem on various aspects related to fate and life.

  9. odyzz says:

    engrossing..loved how you craved life with your words...

  10. Like the opening, simple and to the point

  11. CYNOSURE says:

    beautiful composition...perfect use of words... :)

  12. odyzz says:

    typo *carved..

  13. Mousumi says:

    "life is like a chewing gum,
    we have to chew
    moments when it's sweet,
    are far and few,
    we just can't spit it,
    and have a new
    we have to wait,
    as dry grass waits for the dew
    we search, we pry
    only at the right moment,
    we can fly"

    So inspiring....I must say it is the best thing I read today...so inspiring :-)

  14. Sri Valli says:

    Inspiring poem! Beautifully written

  15. beautiful...loved the rhyme !

  16. Fighting against fate, very motivating and well written.

  17. Geeta Lal says:

    It's awesome. Really good rhythm, meter and rhyming.

  18. Good one...."we search, we pry
    only at the right moment,
    we can fly" Nice lines :-)

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  19. Poems are good

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