life is not a fairy tale
success is prison,
that we have to bail
sometimes we pass,
often we fail
everyone is on their own, mate
if one door is closed
we have open, another gate
and that's why I am fighting against fate
to keep walking,
is in our hand
sometimes it's flower,
sometimes thorn on the land
no one knows the song,
that will be played by life's band
and we are forced to dance,
on the burning sand
everyone is on their own, mate
if one door is closed
we have open, another gate
and that's why I am fighting against fate
life is like a chewing gum,
we have to chew
moments when it's sweet,
are far and few,
we just can't spit it,
and have a new
we have to wait,
as dry grass waits for the dew
we search, we pry
only at the right moment,
we can fly
everyone is on their own, mate
if one door is closed
we have open, another gate
and that's why I am fighting against fate
Sourabh Kumar (Guest Writer)
Categories:
English Poetry
A very good take on life and its myriad intricacies.
LOVELY LINES Sourabh..
So discerning--you really are a master at expressing your feelings,i esp. liked this one
and we are forced to dance,
on the burning sand
Sourabh . Salute to you for displaying the perfect attitude required to live a life.
it's inspiring...splendid poem
Beautiful lines:)
Saurabh miya cha gaye dost.
splendid yaar...
lines touches my heart.
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A very nice poem on various aspects related to fate and life.
engrossing..loved how you craved life with your words...
Like the opening, simple and to the point
beautiful composition...perfect use of words... :)
typo *carved..
"life is like a chewing gum,
we have to chew
moments when it's sweet,
are far and few,
we just can't spit it,
and have a new
we have to wait,
as dry grass waits for the dew
we search, we pry
only at the right moment,
we can fly"
So inspiring....I must say it is the best thing I read today...so inspiring :-)
Inspiring poem! Beautifully written
beautiful...loved the rhyme !
Fighting against fate, very motivating and well written.
Very well written..
It's awesome. Really good rhythm, meter and rhyming.
Good one...."we search, we pry
only at the right moment,
we can fly" Nice lines :-)
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