kal raat ek
khwab dekha
soch ke
daayron se aage nikle
aur aage
jaake maahtaab dekha
kabhi
baareek galiyon ki kashmakash ko,
kabhi
lehlahaati kaliyon ki muskaan ko dekha
galiyan
meri aahat se kuch pareshan thi
par kaliyon
me se ek kali se meri halki si pehchaan thi
maine
puchha kaun ho tum
kya maine
tumhein kahin dekha hai
wo kuch
jhoomi,
kuch
balkhayi
aahista se
wo natkhat,
apne asli
roop mein aayi
kaali
zulfon ka baadal,
kaandhe pe
thehra tha
pari sa
chehra,
rang
sunehra tha
usne mujhe
dekha,
aur masti
mein kuch gaane lagi
nazrein to
uspe thehri thi,
par meri
saans ab aane jaane lagi
wo bebaak
thi
gustaakh
thi
ik pal meri
koi nahi
agle pal
nigehbaan thi
duniya ke
lehzon se farak thi wo
andheri
galiyon mein deepak ki jhalak thi wo
mere paas
aake wo mujhse lipat gayi
laga koi
behti nadi aake mujh mein simat gayi
uske baahon
ke dhaagon se khud ko see gaya tha
us ek pal
mein main sadiyaan jee gaya tha
main hairan
tha
pareshaan
tha
ke kaun hai
ye,
jo iss
tarah chhu raha hai
chehra to
anjaan hai
kyun apna
lag har soon raha hai
pehle wo
meri bekarari pe muskayi
phir boli
meri bebaaki ko koi ilzaam na dena
apna na
samajh pao to na samjho
par iss
apnepan ko kisi rishte ka naam na dena
dhadakte
dil ki daraarein kuch aur badhne lagi
dil ki har
baat wo meri saanso mein padhne lagi
ab humse
sabar kahan hona tha
kho chuka
tha jo kuch bhi khona tha
maine
palkon badhaayi,
uske gaalon
ko chhua
kashti
toofan mein aayi,
aur hoti
rahi dhuaan
kahaani
itni hi hoti to munasib hota
na meri
aankh hi dukhti, na dil hi rota
isse pehle
ki hum sarhadein tod paate
palkein
jhapki aur hum karwatein badal gaye
salwatein
hi salwatein baaki thi ab mere paas
aankhein
khuli aur wo meri baahon se pighal gaye
gila nahin,
gila karein
bhi to kaise
raat ka
kuch to hum pe ehsaan tha
bewafa ise
kahein bhi to kaise
ye bhi nahi
kehte ke ye savere ka zulm tha
kyun ki
raat guzregi humein iss baat ka bhi ilm tha
par jadu hi
kuch aisa tha uski baat mein
ke ab har
din guzrega bus uski raat mein
us bebaak
kali ko lekar phir bahaar aayegi
phir din
guzrega, aur phir raat aayegi
Categories:
Hindi Poetry
This poem is based on true incidences, of course if you consider dreams as true.. ;)
I hope you guys enjoy it. :)
Oh God this is damn Good Deepak.! :)
Loved each line of this wonderful composition.
Somehow could not control my :)Smile:) while reading this as you woven the words into a magical poem that narrates such a stupendous event of your life. It feels as if they are based on true incidences but not a dream, and in my opinion I do not consider dreams as true incidences... ha ha!
Every line has a story to tell, I Guess.
Good work, keep going and keep writing such masterpiece :)
great lines...har ek shabd dil ko choo jata hai.. :)
this is just lovely!! :) i loved it!
Nice one Deepak!
"isse pehle ki hum sarhadein tod paate
palkein jhapki aur hum karwatein badal gaye
salwatein hi salwatein baaki thi ab mere paas
aankhein khuli aur wo meri baahon se pighal gaye
Huzoor, yeh padh ke to main bhi pighal gaya!
nice poetry true to life
umda kavita sachche sapno ki
enjoyed reading it
aur .....gila karein bhi to kisese !! amazing poem !!
"mere paas aake wo mujhse lipat gayi
laga koi behti nadi aake mujh mein simat gayi
uske baahon ke dhaagon se khud ko see gaya tha
us ek pal mein main sadiyaan jee gaya tha"
Simply awesome lines!! Brilliant! Loved it :)
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Adaa aap ki dil ko chhu gayi..
Naayab si wo kali kuch jaadu sa kar gayi..
Yun to hum khwaabon ke pichey daurtey nahi..
Aap ka khwaab haqiqat ko bhula gayi..
Take a bow Deepak sahab.. good good thread of imagination.
extremely...fantabulous...so nyc
expressing how it was in words would do injustice to the feelings flowing through it....
This was my first read of urs and i thoroughly loved it...
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